I agree with DJ-HappyFace...
You didn't "write" shit, kid. You just did a sound swap. Even then, there's virtually nothing impressive about this.
It's in desperate need of equalizing, the mids are way drowned out and the lows are barely audible. It sounds paper thin and stupid, FAR WORSE THAN THE ORIGINAL.
Quit stroking your own ego, yer not foolin' the pros.